One color dominates everything
Like a lightbulb covered in plastic
This red mist splatters across all
Feeding off the hate from my soul
In this bloody chamber, I begin to ponder
The meaning of all this rage, and all this hate
Is it really needed? Should I feel it at all
The following thoughts, are those of enlightenment
If life itself has no evil
then how can one know the meaning of good?
This evil is completely necessary
It shows the world the meaning of purity
Without the Sinner there is no Saint
Without the Holy there are no Damned
When God sent his son Lucifer to hell
He then gave meaning to himself
To those who call themselves good
Who think they have never sinned
If your life is without good AND evil
You may as well be eating glass
A contest entry
- Abstract. Be different. by Trent plus pen.
650 points, ended July 3, 2007, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
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Wow. I'm spechless, very impressive.
Generally (and I dont mean this to offend) Christian based poems annoy the crap out of me, but this is different. You have such an awesome outlook on it, and it is indeed very different.
This poem has impressed me hugely.
"Without the Sinner there is no Saint
Without the Holy there are no Damned"
Best line ive read for a long time.
Keep on the awesome worka nd goodluck in my first contest!
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I cant believe i understand this completly
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NICE...it reminds me of killing people who want or have hurt me. For some reason. But I do love it!
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Woah. For not taking long this poem is deep. I think it gives us a bit more insight to the things going through that head of yours.
This evil is completely necessary
It shows the world the meaning of purity
That part is my favorite..
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