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Fumbled First Kiss

I watched as you began to insinuate lines that may lead to that first kiss,
fumble through the awkward motions; waiting for you to lean in.
Bite my lip, feel that heart beat.
Roll my eyes at just how cute you are,
trying to figure out how to turn the awkward into romance.
And watching you wonder how my lips taste.

You think you know me,
but do you really?
Can you see past the doors I keep shut,
locked with a key to my heart; my soul.

You have one last shot,
you can make this shot.
I could stand here all night,
but the suns coming out.
Take a risk, lean in for the kiss,
trust me you wont miss.

I'm a little coy,
and boy you don't know just how much I'm waiting for this too.
One more,
Chance you'll make this,
One more,
Line, lets skip it.
One more moment,
and the magic isn't missing.

I'll roll my eyes at just how cute you are,
trying to figure out how to turn the awkward around into romance.
And watching you wonder how my lips taste.
As you lean in I realize just how cliche this is,
but trust me the magic isn't missing.
One more chance, I know you'll make it.
One more line, lets just skip it.
One more moment, and the magic isn't missing.
The magic isn't missing.

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  • ToRmEnTeD-fLuTe
    May 27, 2007

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    Excellent

    This is a very good poem. I cant believe you have so many poems. I hardly have time to get on. Keep writng!


  • u took my user name
    May 14, 2007

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    i really like the fourth stanza for some reason... lol. Me likes mucho :-)

    Great job with the first and last stanza. They compliment eachother well. A pleasure to read. hehe. it's really cute :-)

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    Love you, zemër


    Neri


  • sunny day
    May 9, 2007

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    Well, I haven't stopped by your work in a while and this one caught my eye. The magic is definitely not missing here. You captured just how awkward that first kiss can be. Great flow and imagery, the lyrics are wonderful. You had me from the title down to the last word. I felt these words coming from your heart and I also see you are becoming very serious with your work. I have missed a lot since I last read one of your pieces. My loss and I am sorry. I will have to get to more. I hope you are well my young friend. Love and God bless you always, Joyce


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 6, 2007

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    lol tis is cute, and a nice poem, i mean you did a great job on this, i like it, keep it flowing, i like this