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The Reality of A Dream

Nightime.

I close my eyes
glittery
butterflies
arise.

Shimmery
glimmery
rainbows
SPLASH
across
  the
    radiant lit
        Heavens.

Smooth
Blue
Glassy river
razzle
dazzles
into a bubbly
waterfall.

twinkly
dewdrop
diamonds
drizzle from the
almighty
above.

An imagination illusion
I awake from the dream.

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  • k2vet
    April 18, 2007
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    intresting style, i like how gentle it is and you have managed to create some nice image