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A Dear John Letter

Dear john,love is what you make it
but have no fear,love is always near
If it seems like i dont care
then your probally right
as a matter of fact this could have
been your night
That stupid thing that i said
baby dont let that go to your head
that stupid thing that you said
I've already heard.
Dear john,your love is dead
baby I feel your pain
but what is there to gain
But you said,when the motion
hits the ocean
O baby no,I said
when the rabbit hits the floor
Then baby you gotta go

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  • S A Adelmann
    October 2, 2008
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    I'm sure you didn't mean "probably" in line 4.


    • jazman
      October 3, 2008
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      Jazman

      you should have said,"I'M sure you meant "Probably"in line 4." Some words are spelled just the way the author wants you to speak them,and have you ever thought about that. you made an attempt to point out a mistake,i dont see any. but (thanks) anyway