I hang my coat upon this rack
Like the skin on my back
Hooks bite into flesh
I have sinned
Like I took a second glance
Never cared
As this knife twists my insides
As it brings in the pain
We chant a former melody
Of lust
Of death
Of all the shadows in the rain
And as the beat travels through and through
Emptiness embarks on a journey,
Killing me in night
I've been positioned
As a laughing stock I remain
And the day by day horrors still come out to play
By the heat of the sun
I burn into skin
The words unknown
There is where it starts
This is where we begin
Author notes
It's kind of hard to understand, and although I"m not anti-christ [I'm agnostic] this is more of a satanistic theme..and I SWEAR if you b*tch me oout, it will not end
A contest entry
- Xx.Dark Blood.xX by dying-gothic-roses.
567 points, ended April 9, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i just wanted to let you know that i moved the contest ending to april 10th because im kinda getting anxious to end thgis because i like all the entries and i want to judge now
lol
xX*Good Luck*Xx
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i wont bitch you out lol i liked it thjough i idnt really want it to end lol
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thanks
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i really like this write. nice work.
the lines flow beautifuly.
the first and third verses are my favourite.
burtal.x
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