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Twist of Bitter

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Fear me not, for though you have lost
You will not bleed as I bled for you.
I will not wish upon you my former pain.
You are so pathetic, my nemesis.
Your apology is no good this time
And I will shed no tears for you.
I will remain your twist of bitter
Your sweetest regret, unto eternity.
But I'll bite my tongue, swallow your screams
Taste your pain as betrayal bleeds.

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Just a random thought, with a strange inspiration behind the story, which is no longer posted here. If you want to know, just ask.

Note to Devin: Just in case you have decided to stop by my page again, I will ask you to please leave now. That is all.

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  • Da-Lyricologist
    April 20, 2007
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    Cool Beans

    wow you write some dark poems... You Rock Girl... Hey let me know if you want to do a collaboration


  • Kari gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    This was really filled with lots of raw emotions. It was good. The best of luck to you in the contest.
    Kari


  • silverflameca
    April 6, 2007
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    Tee hee, just writing to see if my comment will get deleted too? Man, that was quite an outburst from you, and just when I was wanting to go to bed... And now look at me, all awake and making nonsense on your page.
    The poem was an interesting portrayal of emotions. Good luck in the contest.