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Dream Land

The only time,
i feel alive,
is in my sleep,
fighting things.
In a suit,
with lots of armour.
I jump up and down,
and save the world.
I call this town,
this, B-E-A-utiful town,
dream land.
The wonderful place,
where swearing is another craze,
and people are nice,
yet some are rude. 
I have that prince,
yes, he's perfect.
I save the world,
yes they love me.
Some dreams they scream at me,
some where i die,
which make me want to cry.
Some of those dreams, however,
which i die,
make me even happier,
and wish i weren't alive.
This is rare,
and it does make me feel bare,
when i feel so happy,
that dying is a last resort.

I love the dreams,
or i call them, Fantasies,
where i'm a ninja,
fighting off those evils.
I jump in trees,
i float in the air,
a dreams the only place,
flying is allowed.

I love that feeling of being uplifted.
I wish i could fly,
like in my dreams.
Where i was happy,
so happy i could fly!
How bizarre,
yet how beautiful?

You know it is,
so pretty, you can see.
Just want until,
you enter dream land.

Author notes

"Fantasy" Nice!! :]]

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  • Rajaram
    April 20, 2007

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    Let all your dreams come true to all the people of the world. Because, your poem is very much universal. Great to read such a wonderful poe. I too apply for the residentship in your beautiful town, filled with charma and love.


  • k2vet
    April 18, 2007
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    Love it! so pretty ful!!! Thanks for entering


  • Engelbert Humpalot
    April 18, 2007

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    This is a nice long poem and we all love nice long warm ones. I know I do........................

    God bless you forever.


  • AndStarsDoShine
    April 10, 2007
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    BUTTABLU!!! [beautiful]
    I love it!!!
    Love you,
    Marisa


  • Wrendered
    April 6, 2007

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    ^_^

    I love this. It starts off very joan of arc and ends on such a positive note. Thank you for sharing, I needed a pick me up, darling. Keep writing and I promise I'll keep reading! I love you bunches.

    :Wren:

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