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On the blank canvas of my rented apartment

On the blank canvas
of my rented apartment
artwork
dug
from thrift store bins
serves as
the eclectic collage
of self-portraiture

the lithograph of New Orleans
a reminder of trips untaken
phone calls unanswered

Pin in my leg
I’m pronounced recovered
from the crash

still I limp


I went to the beach tonight
with a photograph in my pocket
tore it into 128 pieces
and hoped one reached Osaka

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  • misselaineous
    April 25, 2007
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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    April 15, 2007

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    a very powerful emotional write, like the pin in the leg line, the imagery is well selected...


    al