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You never even loved me

I cant beleive you said you loved me
its just another word to you
you have no idea of the things you put me through
you said you loved me so i said i loved you too
then i had to leave, only for a little while
comming back to nothing, not even a smile

i've become lost in all thats unknown
i dont know what to beleive
i feel like going home, though im already there
i guess my heart is broken now
theres a puzzling feeling in the air

this is a feeling ive never felt
i cant beleive i loved you so much
if i think hard enough, i can feel your touch
you never loved me at all
i feel like such a fool
i was used and abused, feeling like a tool


in my heart i take this blow
how much deeper can i fall
but now i know
love is for fairy tales
to a fairy tale i will crawl

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  • Musicqueen1012
    April 7, 2007
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    Wo0ow the poem was well written. It explains heartbreak so well. good luck in the contest