Vicki's spirit is now filled with grace,
I just wish that I could see her face,
Cute decorations on that tree with lace,
Kind of unfair to see you in that case,
I sometimes wish I could have taken your place.
A memory fills the pain of grief back into my heart,
Nothing is more painful than feeling this part,
Don't judge me...If I could I would've taken it away from the start.
My love for you will never go away,
Everyday when we were kids we would play,
Gaining your friendship made me stay,
And your nickname We called You was "May May"
Nobody will replace You & it will stay that way!
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If You spell out the first letter of every column, it will tell you what this poem is about.
Written July 12th, 2003
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I just love the way that this poem is wrote out. Using the first letter in line to spell out yours and her names. Oh smart! I believe that in life there are people that enter your life at a certain time and place for a certain reason or purpose. She came into your life to show you that someone cared and to help you through your rough times. Now she is showing you that you can do it on your own. But that she is still there to lend so angel guidence.
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WTG!!
great write Sara. I have been experimenting with this style of poetry, although I can't seem to say as much. Keep it up, your work is great! Mary Anne
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Hey it's me again. I know I comment to much. But I'm sorry it's just that I feel your pain. I guess because the samething happened to me. I lost someone very close. My fiance. I hope as time goes on that you heal, but I know that no one will ever change how you feel. The days will get brighter and the as time goes by the pain will get lighter. Just rememeber one thing. That life is more precious then anything. You have a great talent. I enjoy your poems all of them.
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Wow! A truly heartfelt write and a very creative one at that. I loved how you wrote this.. it gave it so much more meaning! Beautifully done. *sonya*
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It was extremely clever of you to write an entire poem with the first letter of each line planned in advance......also your ryming of each line is brilliant too!
The poem is very touching .....can almost see Vicki and Megan "at play".....u have depicted the relationship beautifully and Vicki's loss is also penned very soulfully.....i can feel your pain....
simply poignant!very brilliantly written!!all the very best!
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