You have been gone
For far too long
My life has change
And i hear your voice in every song
I hurt each day
Because your not here
I have changed so much
You wouldn't believe it if you were here
I miss you so much
I can't let you go
I cared for you a lot
Even though i never let it show
The day you died
I lost a part of me
I cry each night for you
Don't you see
My world has changed
And as have I
I have learned how to choose
But not how to say goodbye
Me and you
Were so close
And now i can't go to your grave
Without feeling i have let you go
Goodbye was the last word
I heard you say
Then you hang up the phone
And i ran to your house right away
But when i got there
I was to late
You were gone
And i was left with hate
i have old photos
that you took
of me and you
and your funny looks
i look at those
and i try to smile
but i can' t
not even for a while
i thought my heart
would heal
but i know it wont
because this pain is to real
i hear your voice
saying goodbye
and i can't get it out of my head
i can't make it die
in my heart
i will always love you
and i can't let you go
and i hope you can't let me go too
Please tell me what you think
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pretty cool
awwww this can be for a friend who died in Iraq last year..my goodfriend..=(..he's a soldier..oh brings back the sad memories...good poem by the way just makes me think about him..the soldier of my life..lol....gone...gone...gone
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thank you
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wow im not girly but that made me cry
its beautifu
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thanks...i try my best
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you're very strong i'm feeling shame for this...i'm so weak compared with you.... but i've told you this before "don't pretend nothing" just set it free, just be like you are, don't smile if you don't want, your core will be mended i swear...
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This poem is really goooood, it reminds me of my friend...and the memories it brings back....not being able to see them again...or express how you truly felt about them. This poem hits me really deep good write
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thank you
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well written..the start was good..but a couple of stanzas down the flow looked forced...however the better effect of the poem resumed soon...well written..
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hey thanks
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Immaculately Stupendous!
Wow... I am... Totally speechless... This Poem... It brings back so many memories. So many mixed emotions... But at the same time, it is SO beautiful! I know what it is like to lose a loved one. Actually, try 3, to suicide... But you just need to be able to pick yourself up and drive on. Because, until they invent a real time machine that works, we can't change our past. But we DO have the power to decide our future. I'm really glad you wrote this poem. It helped me out a little for today. Just keep on writing, and if you ever need to talk, I'm ALWAYS here for you. *hugs* Great job, take care. Love you -Nick
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Letting go of someone you love is one of the hardest parts about growing up. Letting go of that love is also letting go of a part of you. Like a paper crumbled up, we're never the same person. Good Write.
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thank you
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I can relate fully to this.To see someone you love so much like that and then lose them.I'm sorry for your loss,I'm sure that person's watching over you.wonderful writeing. :]
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thank you so much for that comment
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All to powerful, I know what you mean by you not being able to let go, This is beautiful...
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