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Exhortation

If you drink the juice , you will know the sweetness
Some people will be bitter, but you don't have to.
There are thousands of hunters in the mountains,
hunting for hobbies and killing for pleasure, but you don't have to.
If you must win, win the hearts of the people.
Some show disrespect to people they don't know, but you don't have to
If you steal , you will look rich and successful to the people
but if you get caught, you will lose dignity , and you don't have to.
Work hard , earn your bread, make it you goal to live.
For if your life is stained by sin and shame,
then living is a thing, that you don’t have to.


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  • Tota
    March 21, 2008
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    you are the most lovely women


  • Sarah957
    April 22, 2007

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    There is wisdom in these words. You are a smart man and I love the way you write. Keep the poems coming they are original and refreshing!
    Yours always
    Sarah


  • BabyBun silver member
    April 7, 2007
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    A refreshing entry. Thanks and good luck!