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Twisted Me

Twisted personality
Bands of colour wound
Tightly into one strong cord
With fire, wind are bound

There is a sunny side of me
That dances with the dawn
Sprinkling light and rainbows round
And bounding like a fawn

This pretty side, this angel side
This butterfly in me
This swan that I have sought to be
Gives wings, I fly high, free

But what goes up must soon come down
And light must fade to dark
Sometimes I switch to raven's call
From singing with the larks

There is a darker side of me
One I strive to hide
Sensual siren, breaking hearts
On wings of evil ride

This shadow side, this devil side
This lioness me
Venom seeping through the cracks
A different kind of free

And what I am, you must beware
The darkness and the light
For both are me, and I am both
From dawn to blackest night

Twisted personality
And bands of colour wound
The blacks and whites and shadowed grays
With fire, earth are bound

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  • Mingan Tzar Avarus
    April 17, 2007

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    Beautiful, we all have our light and dark sides, some show them more then others, and a grand painting you left in my mind.

    ~Corey~


  • WriteOrWrong597
    April 5, 2007

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    This was really great. I love the descriptions of dark and light, good and evil. I love the idea. I love the whole thing. Really interesting. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Mingan Tzar Avarus
    April 5, 2007
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    Thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck.

    ~Corey~


  • Lone Defender
    April 5, 2007

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    Perfect description of both, gorgeous...I love it, always. This one is one of your best.

    (Then again, I say that about all of them, don't I?)