Twirling
many facets
pivot on a spectrum
each one clearly reflected in
your eyes.
Author notes
cinquain
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #14 by Samplette.
425 points, ended April 5, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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spectacular
You put in words the possibility each of us has to see feelings held in another's eyes IF we just take the time to look. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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brief but with oceanic depth
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Lovely. Hit me between the eyes. Good luck in the contest.
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Just a gorgeous Cinquain, stunning!
Best to you in the contest and Thank You for such a uniquely fine piece~
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Absolutely exquisite!
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Lovely!
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A beautiful cinquain. Very nicely written. Thank you for entering in the contest. Great job.
Sam
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