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Noreen

Noreen
Soulful woman
Touching lives easily
With passion and understandings
A heart can not help but be touched by her
Sending a mind to dream
Of soulful things
Noreen
Truly unique
Standing out in any crowd
With a pure sensuality
Neglecting no aspect of the passion
Existing within her beauty
Dear to me as a friend
Above all else
Noreen

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  • Laura
    April 20, 2007
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    ohh this is beautiful, you have penned something special here well done love xxx


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 19, 2007
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    Thanks Mark for this beautiful write. I really loved it.
    Thanks again.


    • Cerulean gold member
      April 19, 2007
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      Your welcome. I enjoyed writing it. Maybe next time I won't wait for a contest to write you one.

  • Deceits Tears
    April 5, 2007
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    Wow this is great, very nice tribute, All the best in the contest .


  • Whoochi gold member
    April 5, 2007

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    Great form, I love it....TY for entering my contest. awesome qualities of her that you penned well...good job, good luck!


  • TheSloth
    April 5, 2007

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    I love this poem. I've read it a few times now and each time I love it more. I especially like the form; your line lengths create a shape like an hourglass figure and the use of the name in the poem makes me think that Noreen is the beginning, centre and end of someone's whole life. Although short, it shows great emotion and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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