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Right from the beginning

two steps
one glance

they judged me

A contest entry

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  • travis34dietC
    April 8, 2007

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    very powerful poem! i like how you separated "they judge me" from the rest of the poem. it makes it stand out more, feel more powerful. good job!
    thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Spiritual Nature
    April 5, 2007

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    Excellent poem, so powerly written in 7 words. I am impressed. Great job. You bowled me over.


  • Lunatyx
    April 5, 2007

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    Poetry goes well with facts
    Nice write !

    Greetz
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