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Deraest Mother

I love you
But enough is enough
I watched you on drugs for 12 years
You won't let go
You use me and abuse me
Your husband has tried to rape me
I told you
You don't care
If it weren't a crime
He'd be dead
Now I am with child
And you want me to stay
Why so my child can see
Everything I have
So she can go through all I had to
He won't touch her
She won't know him
I watch a 3 yr old that isn't even yours
That you took in
Apparently for me to raise
I have my own on the way
I need to worry about us
You aren't paying me
And I am buying you food
Giving you rides
Cleaning your house
I need to get back to mine
And live my own life
So bye bye for now
You want us come see us
Don't bring your husband
And mine won't kill him

Author notes

My mother is trying to force me to stay in a house and be her live in nanny and maid with a man living their that molested and tried to get me to have sex with him when I was younger... And now she expects me and my unborn child to be in it.  I have got to find a way out and I will soon
By the way burning paper inside the house is not a good idea

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 29, 2007

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    wow...i'm so very very sorry...my mom isn't this bad but i understand the whole being trapped by your mom though...anyway awesome poem, i hope everything works out for you and your baby and good luck and thankyou so much for entering my contest.


  • smile46
    April 28, 2007

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    exactly what i say id get the hell out to not to be rude but seriously... i mean what kind of mom would trust her husband over a daughter that says she got molested by him.. that is crazy and you aby shouldnt be put in that either.. that would be like a life in hell... who knows what he could do to her.. im sorry but you should get out of there as soon as possible i cant say much tho cuz im not that old soo yeah but good poem nyways...


  • Amaranth Dihdzere
    April 5, 2007

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    GET THE HELL OUT OF THERE.I hate any man that trys to molest or rape woman,from a family exeperience(not on me) I pray you do not go into that filthy house with that old creep of a man or whatever he is.You want the best for your child and I know you will be a great mother.Great poem by the way and I can feel all your emotions in the words.Well later and good luck.
    SEE NO EVIL,HEAR NO EVIL,SPEAK NO EVIL.


  • recoverymom
    April 5, 2007
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    burn outside lol. great poem.