Drip drop drip
Rain falls upon our fogging window
As you lie in my loving arms
We watch together the light gray sky
Puddles form on the ground
The world is washed clean again
Soil is fed to bring forth life
A perfect day to stay inside
Holding each other warm
Looking onto the outside
As it is being reborn
Please tell me what you think
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Awww - this is a lovely poem. I could imagine a day like this in the arms of my gorgeous ma. Very evocative and well written.
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very nice sweethert, i remember us talking about the rain which is whay this ones so nice. veryt good.
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Thank you so much for the comment
It means so much coming from you 
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