lost and alone with blurred visions of my past and the path i once was on all thats left is guilt for staying alive i feel like i'm in a dark never ending alley where all the doors are locked which leaves me trapped.
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we all feel this way once or twice or more in our lives. Keep going and dont stop. There will be a reason to live and reason to be alive. so dont give up.
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Really short yet immensley powerful. Really good
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all journeys have locked doors along the way of darkness. We all must fine the one, that special one that allows just our hand to open it and find the love and peace we have searched for. You can find yours, I am sure.
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Nice short and sweet write! Our past can haunt us, but when we can forgive ourselves others will too! The doors in the alley are locked because they are not for you, keep going till you find the one with the bright light! That is your's. You will get out of this alley my dear neice!
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