Hollowing out sins
Cracking guilt
Melting this heart
Squeezing this soul
Filling with untainted purity
Piecing back innocense
Solidifying this tiny piece
Revitalizing breath of life
God, Your changing me
Transforming me
Repairing inside and out
To live again
Author notes
As soon as we chose to follow God, He starts to change us, and make us a better person. It's a beautiful thing!
A contest entry
- Wow Me...Sweep Me Off My Feet by eyesofanangel524.
2300 points, ended April 10, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - When You Know its Wrong - But you Believe its Right (winner takes all) by Gypsy Rover.
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow...such a simple poem but the effect of it in my heart is so incredible...continue to write powerful poems..I love the last stanza....
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Great flow...and the use of the verbs at the beginning of almost each line was well done. Refreshing, with a great message.
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Very well done. You have done what I have asked for. Your comment is so very correct. Evolving into a beautiful being. Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck to you.
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