x.
False realities
Played out by youthful minds
to cover darkened secrets
a dolls head
with a bullet hole
created with the tip
of a blue ball point pen
pushed through the plastic.
xx.
It should never happen
to a child at least
a witness
to a farewell party
with only one guest.
xxx.
As unlucky would have it
in passing
whilst a fantasy took
her to the garden shed
a castle, her the princess
her king, father
and his sheath
made mincemeat
in front of her eyes.
xxxx.
his wanting didn't cover life
left hollow from an
adulterous wife
left guilty from a perfect
child he couldn't love.
through depression.
without sharing this
without wanting her to be enlightened
he let his daughter know.
Author notes
OPTION 13 - x Empathic Rose x.
I hope this makes you cry
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Comments
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This is so good, powerful, and well worded. I really like it.
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This was really well worded, i really felt it great job!
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Wow. This one most definitely made me feel. I really like this! It's really powerful.
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Another one that angers be beyond everything else. Some people are just a disgrace to this entire world! Thanks for entering.
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i like it its realy good
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This is one of my new favorites. I really liked reading this one. Good work, and good luck on my contest.
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I really like this poem good job her i like this poem very much the story is sad but the emtions are expressed so keenly it all comes tother to become a pretty decent poem good job and good luck
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i wont dq as you said what option but what is/are your other poem(s)??
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it leaves a mystery, but it sounds like you said all you needed to say and we (the readers) get a feel for the emotion you felt or feel. It's expressive and interesting in that sense, well written! Love it.
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No
you didnt even follow the rules, so i didnt read it.
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That was fantastic. I loved that. WOW. I dont know what to say other than. THANKS FOR ENTERING THIS!!!
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nicley wrtin thanx for entering good luck and i hope you join other contests i make thanx for entering
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This is good. Nicely done. Very dark and sad but very well written. Such strong emotion in this. Nicely done. Good job. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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