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Yearning

I look up at the stars as I think to myself ..
Oh how I wish..God "I miss you so .."


My heart cries out your name
as my soul reaches up


feeling the warmth of your embrace

hearing you speak my name..

 

in my mind the image of you

becomes so clear.my heart overwhelms with joy


my eyes no longer cry as I drift off..

to be with you in the starry sky above


but then it becomes cold silence fills the air

no longer do I feel your embrace


the pain I once knew has returned

 and image of you is gone


making me realize your home

is now in heaven and mine is here on Earth


where my life still go on
without you standing by my side

Author notes

Written For my Friend Renee..Since she now stands alone
without the one she loved for 15 years

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  • penman gold member
    June 3, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Awww, what a thoughtful and wonderful write. Very touching and considerate.


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 23, 2007
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    Well said


    I am sorry for your pain

    I know the story behind the words

    I feel your sorrow

    Rick


  • Shakes-spear
    April 5, 2007
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    Very Nice

    I have lost friends and the feeling is the same. You never forget them, but life does go on. Sometimes you can hear them talking to you, listen closly because they can help you at times. This was very nice and took me back to this feeling as I read about your friends loss! Good luck to you both, Bubba

    • mypassion
      April 23, 2007
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      thank you

      Thanks Bubba for commenting and showing how big your lovable geart is..especially now. thngs have been hard I hate to see my friend in such pain but all I can do is comfort her when she needs a hug and wipe her tears when she cries..

      Luv you bunches....

      sis

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