I feel that I am messing up everything that I have.
I don't want us to drink anymore,
It makes us that more bad,
I think that we try to amuse ourselves just by getting drunk.
I think it's time to have a talk about this drunken problem.
I know that we love each other, I know that your the one.
That's not why we drink though, I think it's goes way back.
To a to a time and place before we met, a time when we were young.
I find myself looking back, wondering what I could of done.
Wishing I would have found you sooner, and wondering what we would of become.
I regret some of the things I'd done, but I know that I wouldn't be the same.
I wouldn't be who I am now if I hadn't done what I've done.
A contest entry
- im baaack!!! by nobodys-girl.
500 points, ended April 8, 2007, 22 entries
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i have family that has a drinking problem and i see her struggle to get better and than something bad will happen and it pushes her right back to where she was. it hurts the whole family but no one can help her. im sorry that you have/are going through this and i hope everything works out for you. thankyou so much for entering my contest and good luck!
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everything that seems wrong seems to fit the cycle that never seems to end. the idea of drinking and using that to go back to an earlier time worked really well, and ending this piece with not being the person that you are worked really well. sometimes people need to think things over and figure things out
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