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The rising of Soulful Woman

I sense the pain in your soul

Pulling you into the darkness

Exploring into your vocabulary

You create a new light

Uplifting yourself from the shadows

Expelling the pain, with each stroke of your pen

You become counselled

Creating words of magnificence

Portraying the wholesome imagery, we all desire

Tackling the inner cravings

You lead

Becoming soulful

A soulful Woman

In a list

A contest entry

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    OOOOOOOOOooooohhhhhhhhhh, so emotion filled and true!!!!
    I love this description of a "soulful woman".  Very creative and thought provoking!!!!!!!!!! I really enjoyed this read!!!! Best wishes in the contest!!!!!   Smile

  • Darkened Seraph
    September 8, 2007

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    oo a very pretty write one which i enjoyed reading because its soo peaceful and beautiful, another good write not one of your best but still beautiful


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 19, 2007

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    Thank you for this..I know how hard it was for you to be nice to me..LOL
    I love ya, you crazy brit..
    Thanks again..and congrats on the honorable mention.
    Soulful Woman


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 19, 2007

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    This was a beautiful tribute to a wonderful lady whom we are lucky to have touching our souls on AP! So pleased we could all pay tribute to her. Congratualations on the HM and this was certainly my pleasure to read ~Tia


  • BlackBlackHeart
    April 18, 2007
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    interesting, i like it

  • raingoddess gold member
    April 5, 2007

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    Excellent

    You have done a great job as always, good luck in the contest, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


  • Whoochi gold member
    April 5, 2007
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    Good job, good luck and TY for entering....extremely well written and captures her essence....

  • Bob Fox
    April 5, 2007

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    Expelling the pain

    I truly think that is what most of us who write wish to do. I know for me it is true. Great write as always


  • kathy1967
    April 5, 2007

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    WOW

    Well I guess so! I love it!! I love every
    single line in this soulful write! much luck
    in the contest.


  • Cerulean gold member
    April 5, 2007
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    Good tribute. I have the feeling she was born soulful though.


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    April 5, 2007

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    Nicely said my dear. I think there are many of us who can relate to these words of yours!
    All the best in this contest
    Gaylene

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