Lay there and relax
I will serve my love to you
from the top of your head
to the tips of your toes
I will devour every inch
Drinking you through every pore
Your body still damp from your shower
Tracing patterns across your
glistening flesh with my tongue,
Kissing you
Tasting you
Licking you
Awakening and arousing your appetite
you respond to my every touch
Drawing you closer to where I want to take you
Setting your body on fire,
a fire that only I can extinguish
Sliding my body on top of you
connecting at that oh so sacred center
Verbal obscenities filling the room
as lust overtakes our senses
Our bodies occupying exactly the same space
Surrounding and filling me
I fall into your arms
You put your sweet lips to my ear
And whisper, “I want more!”
Author notes
In a list
A contest entry
- BUTTERFLY BELLY please by delightfulmess.
625 points, ended June 27, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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kissinsg..Tasting and Licking! How exciting! Few women enjoy the last word! They think its bad taste! You must be very daring and roamntic!
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I WANT MORE!
You so completely rock! go on wit yo bad self my friend!
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LOVELY WRITE I LOVE THIS
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This was a great little erotic piece I really enjoyed I think "I want more" LOL Thankyou for entering my contest
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Fantastic write! My choice for second place in the contest! *smiles impishly* Very warm and drippy, just the way I like a woman... or two... Three bunnies for this!
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Beautiful choice of words and excellent imagery. A very sensual poem.
All the best,
Charishma
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Very Beautiful and Sensual Write
Wow You have written how love should feel between a man and womasn. You make me long for the one in my heart. Big Sigh!! Amazing write. Full of passion yet so tender. You take care,
Bless you,
Sandy
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Chatting about I want more
This sensual poem is what all men would want from their significant other. Letting their love flourish and blossom into an never ending happiness. -
VERY IMPRESSIVE!
Your a very talented poetess and your words brought the image alive in this write. I am very glad to have clicked on to this and I thank you for sharing it with me also congrats in your challenge...
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Sensual
Our bodies occupying exactly the same space
Great write
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LOL @ your author's note
Steamy & sensual piece here...The title is what caught my eye first, then the poem just pulled me along
Thanks for the ride 
Good luck in the contest!!!
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wow...i wonder whats got you going to write these amazing poems...i love this its totally amazing.. well done love xx
laura xxx -
Well, my dear
How could he? I wouldn`t either, for a love like that, with such a loving intro, and invitation to delightfulness. If its the other way, may you should have entitled this, giving you more. LOl.Delight to read and nice thoughts to mix with dreams.
. Rewarded 6
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Wow. this was a beautiful write. kind of made me horny. LOL. also kind of made me wish i had something like that. Good job, keep up the great work. :
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makes a man.........notice
This is another example of Soulful womans eroticism............I think that Soulful Woman is the epitomy of Erotic desire.........
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Woah. This is hot. You really know how to express these thoughts. Sends my mind to a beautiful place. mmmmmmm
Good luck in the contest!
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Yummy, is all I have right now lol.
I loved the picture that came with it! Soo HOT HOT HOT!!! Thanks for your entry and I wish you the best of luck!
Always,
Summer
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