Your presence is like a breath of air,
that flows deep into my soul.
Your presence keeps my heart warm,
though my mind says be cold.
Your presence is soothing,
like that of a river flowing through the earth.
Your presence is like a mothers touch,
when she first gives birth.
Your presence is like gods hand,
when he created Adam and Eve.
Your presence is like no one else's,
it's effects you won't believe.
Your presence is a gift,
and i'll cherish it all my life.
Your presence will last forever,
if you would be my wife.
Author notes
I wrote this poem as a proposal to my future wife whoever she may be. lol.
Please tell me what you think
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This is amazing
well done
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I'm so jealous of your poetry. Its so well written. How do you write so well . Your words must be magical because they always flow together perfectly. Your rhymes are great. ahh everything is good.
I really wish i could write like you. Your ideas are always really sweet. I hope you have a happy valentine's day. If you have a girlfriend she must appreciate the poems of love you write. I wish someone would do that for me.
SO JEALOUS! -
awww.
I really like this
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this was so cute. I ner read a poem that directed the message to presence...
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This is Beautiful
I'm sure that whomever this future wife of yours will be, there'll be no way she could say no after a proposal like that. It took my breath away. I want to say yes for her! lol
Great write Poetboy, I loved it!
~SweeterThanFiction~
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So sweet!
thats wonderful it sounds so sweet,its such a wonderful poem!who ever your wife's gona be is lucky this poem is awesome!go poetboy!
-maddie
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