You don't exist,
your a shadow on the wall,
your voice goes through their ears,
they don't answer when you call.
You don't exist,
it's tearing you apart,
whenever you find the light,
you get thrown into the dark.
You don't exist,
so you have stopped talking,
they forget you are there,
so by yourself you start walking.
You don't exist,
so they push you away,
you hope in your heart,
that they'll see you one day.
You don't exist,
is what is in your mind,
but you exist to someone,
and they are not hard to find.
You do exist,
and this one thing is true,
you exist to someone,
and they're right in front of you.
Please tell me what you think
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I love itttttttt. <3 Logan
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This is soooo sad! What was the inspiration for this piece? I run out of things to say about your poetry.
I am always amazed.
Nakatrea
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Awww! How sad. I loved the poem. It really gives one something to think about. It's very easy to relate to, and I liked how you ended it on a hopeful note. For me this is definately a poem I will revist soon. ^.^ Keep it up, the world needs more people to capture beauty in ink.
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This is a really good poem! It is sad but it is also true to many people. The reptition is very effective and I really like how at the end you changed from 'You don't exist' to 'You do exist' and the mood changes from sad to hopeful.
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Definately a sad write, but it does remind us to pay attention to those we might be making invisible. Gives the reader a few things to think on after having read it.
Keep penning and again, welcome -
Sad
thats a depressing poem,i liked it though,your realy good for a new AP member!welcom's to AP then,need any thing or you got questions you can ask me!
-maddie
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