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Smoke out those teary time bombs

If you could hear...
  this asethmatic o.b.s.e.s.s.i.o.n
that leads to
last minute [[confessions]]

Can you not taste
that nicotine on her breath??

(Shame.faced & for.lorn)

Heavy heels never made such a
pretty pattern in the ground below
  (fucking/mistake)

Chip.chip.chipping away
  at your security blanket

                                                                [[ dictated by pity... ]]

    One more heart attack
  can't be too fatal?

    [rightBABYright
        swear to me youre never wrong]

Air bubbled veins
  POP at the heart
but smogging out your own clock
makes little tarfilled pockets
(amongst your weakness)

                                      Suck on that stick

                                      inhale its comfort((LIES))
                               
                                      Who doesn't enjoy...

                                      A bit of >discoloration<



Author notes

Hmm, my brain has been odd lately, Ihope you enjoy!!

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  • requiempoet gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    Oh hey you entered my contest!!! I wasn't suppose to know you wrote it but I saw you wrote a poem and I needed to read it! I like it!!! only in your author notes...it's your brain not your brian...unless a boy you know is name is Brian and he's acting weird.


  • oh willoughby
    April 4, 2007
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    yes you are odd girl!
    but it was very much good!

  • cowabunga
    April 4, 2007
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    I like the title.