Come to me on liquid clouds of ecstasy.
Sup from the tender places of my heart.
Sojourn in the deep dwellings
of my minds imagination.
Until you know my secret thoughts.
Lay beside me in the calm of passion.
Feel the sting of my sweet caressing flesh.
As I embrace you with the healing
oinment of my love.
On bedded roses of salaciousness,
I am yours for the taking.
Search my eyes and know my soul.
Be with me for all eternity
on a journey of delight.
We can navigate the heavens
on wings of erotic bliss.
As we ascend into rapture,
with each wet and sultry kiss.
New an wonderous worlds to discover
beyond the walls that set us apart.
Twin as wed forever learning
the things we cherish
most in our heart.
Author notes
The poem was inspired by a quote on
Soulful Woman's homepage. See below
Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever.
~ by Anonymous
In a list
A contest entry
- Soulful Woman...Gimme your Soul! by Whoochi.
1000 points, ended April 18, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well baby...I guess you did it...lol
Thanks for the beautiful write. You are an amazing friend..I love all our talks..
Congratulations on the Silver
Soulful Woman
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This was a beautiful piece and I feel certain that Soulfulwoman was touched by your tribute and has already bookmarked this! Just Beautiful with such an excellent flow of creativity and energy. Great entry and congrats on the Silver
~Tia
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This poem is just so beautiful. Congrats on the silver!
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This is a really beautifull poem I really liked how you used your words and the imagery was awsome I loved the beggining when you used "Come to me on liquid clouds of ecstasy." I really liked that line I liked the whole thing lol anyways good luck!
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Very Romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a ver romantic piece here!!Steamy but tastefully written, not recealing too much information, leaving the imagination to take over...Your imagery takes your reader into the magic of the passion in this poem..Very nice!!!Thanks for sharing!!!~~Toni~~
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FIRST OFF , I LOVE THAT QUOTE IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTES. IT DEFINITELY GOES RIGHT WITH THIS POEM, AND I LOVE THE TITLE OF YOUR POEM. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN IN MY OPINION AND I LIKED HOW EASILY THE WORDS SEEMED TO FLOWED AS I READ IT. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
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Love the different contrasts you use in lines..."in the calm of passion..." and " the sting of my sweet caressing flesh..." love that...you painted a lovely descriptive emotional write, and sensual, like she is...and to use a quote off her page, very innovative...TY for entering and good luck in my contest!
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Impressive
I enjoyed the imagery you conveyed here and the words of endearment makes this such a wonderful piece. I thank you for sharing it with me and I wish you the best in your challenge...
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Steamy and filled with a great passion unlike any other...she is a wonderful person and a dear friend...you have shown her to be a wonder in her own right
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