My old cuts bleed again
Pain brought by a friends death
I cant breath anymore
The flowers he gave me withered
I see the blood covering the road
His death came wicked painful
His heart torn from his body
When I sleep the accedent happens again and again
Like a broken record
I writhe when I dream about his death
I see him die every night
Yet when I wake he is still alive
Author notes
My Immortal soul lives forever
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825 points, ended April 16, 2007, 17 entries
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this is a dark and sad poem, I'm sorry for your loss and how it haunts you, the poem itself is really powerful and i like it for the amount of emotion in it, please can you put the option or i will dq by the end of tomorrow though
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