Memories of you,
Still alive, alive in my head...
Endless hours wasted in bed,
The crying and weeping is all that is left,
As I morn like this was death...
Endless nights now that you left...
Memories of you,
Still alive, alive in my head...
Wishing you would save,
Your angel of pain...
From this burning bed...
How can you...
When you up and left,
Now I morn like this was death...
And it's not easy when I still smell your breath,
Inhaling it, so that I might live...
Without it, I have no breath...
Yet here I am just morning death...
I look in your eyes...
You show me the window to your soul,
And make promises that you can not hold...
You kiss my sweet tender lips,
So softly and gentle...
Filling me with passion with nothing to hold...
You embrace me with your big arms,
Wrapping them tightly through out my soul...
Now you tell me I have to let go...
Wounding me, cause now your so cold...
Fooling me, pushing me, scolding me...
You are hurting me!
And I don't know how to just let go...
We used to sing our hearts out ...
Where ever we'd go,
Like two fools in love...
Who would share a love so rare,
Now look, I do not dare...
My tears shatter,
They're endless...
My heart just can't bare...
Losing you is life without air,
Excusing yourself,
You tell me, you dont care...
My heart breaks cause your not there...
-Angel of Pain
A contest entry
- dark and sad rhyming poems please by nobodys-girl.
425 points, ended April 25, 2007, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain, Without Love. by La Tua Cantante.
425 points, ended April 13, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was really good i liked it =]
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Ive read a few of yur works. at first, I noticed that you needed work on your form, but I see that you have gotten that down good. This is a great write, I liked it. Keep it up.
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very good
lots of imagery
i like the story told
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Heya..this was a great write..the flow was smooth and your words were powerful, strong and emotional..I could really relate to this write and enjoyed reading it..keep writting and good luck in the contest
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This is another awesome write. I'm sorry I'm being so brief, but I have limited time on the computer. Good luck in my contest!
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this is really sad but really good. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Hauntingly Brilliant
it akes a certain skill to weave such a portrait of pain, you have a particular grip on the english language which allows you to convey your pain in a particular fashion personalized to you. I loved reading it, and although i feel slightly sad having finished, rest assured it is due to your great ability to convey pain that has done it, congratulations on a great poem.
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thank you
your coment means so much, i thank you for your time in reading it and expressing yourself to me................angelofpain
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This was really good. Well written and expressed. Keep up the good writtings my friend.
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thank you
it means everything to me, love your coment,hope to stay in contact, look foward to being your friend.p.s. how do i send a pitcure from my computer to this site so i have my photo up.thank you again my friend.angel of pain
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one of my best pomes at this time, more to come
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my heart and soul is everything
please tell me what you think
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