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let it ride.

this is the place.
it's not very far.
fights and forgetting.
here's who we are.

art is our refuge.
time is our lie.
music our witness.
sex, our disguise.

faces of anger.
bodies of stone.
dancing in brimstone.
chilled to the bone.

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  • Rin
    September 9, 2007

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    The shortness of each line lends to a fast-pace reading which i did enjoy muchly

    I especially enjoyed the middle stanza

    It's like the anthem of teens everywhere haha

    love
    clay