Drip, Drip
Its the most comfortable sound
Like a baby cooing
I want to stop
I need to stop
But that drip drip just helps so much
The blade looks so comforting
And the feeling as it goes across
The cold metal across the welcoming skin
The questions are asked, but only a lie is the answer
Nobody understands
Nobody helps
Its all because of one BITCH
That the drips and the cold blade feels so good
If only she had listened
If only she had cared
I wouldn't be this fucked up
If she would've cared about her child instead of her drugs or friends
If she wouldn't have let him rape me
Then this wouldn't be happening
I could live
I could love another guy
I wouldn't have lost the one I want and the one I need
And its all because of the BITCH and her best friend
That the wall I built has come crumbling down
Leaving me exposed and vulnerable
No self confidence,all lost
The one that I want looks down upon me, but only in my mind.
Fore I am not pure and holy
I am tattered, ruined and hated, but only in my mind.
So once again tonight I will find comfort in the cold blade
Against my welcoming skin
And await the drip drip that I have grown to need.
A contest entry
- My First Contest Ever *ready to take a challenge?* by LoveLikePoetry.
450 points, ended April 18, 2007, 18 entries
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875 points, ended January 19, 2008, 40 entries
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My name is Christina Nielsen
Comments
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brilliant poem!!! thanks for entering and good luck!
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very good
"but only in my mind."
i have no experience with this issue
but
i do have other issues
and
i don't mean to be coy
but
this is not the answer
hey, i always act "as if"
i'm doing great
starting new
so it's easy
just dress up
and walk out the door
and
act "as if"
you are the best
you are number one
you are a famous movie star
try it
other than that
a very powerful work
shows you have lots of strenght to survive
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I love this poem! I hate your fucking mom shes a crac whore
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