Take a look at this girl
And tell me you don't see inadequate perfection
All this long blond hair
Fair features
Light eyes
Honestly
I'm adorable
And you can't deny it
Book smart
Street wise
Completely honest when in love
Sweetie
You'd be lucky to fall into this
Blond bombshell's trap
Working hands
That are still quite soft
Never spends a minute doing nothing
Reading, writing, swimming
Laying out when I get the chance
At my job all the time
And going to my sisters soccer games
Cheering her on from the sidelines
And making glitter shirts
With her name adorning my chest
A soft touch
A sweet heart
Everything you could ever need
The best cuddler
From here to Sweden
And that's one thing I'm positive about
A whiz at laundry
I'd fold all your socks
And maybe a few of your shirts
The best karaoke singer
An awesome kisser
Don't you see dear
You should be in love with.
Me.
Author notes
Option four.
I feel self-centered. And I tried to be funny with it. I don't really think of my self as street wise. And I'm not really that awesome. But I tried.
I hope you like it.
<3 SweetAmber <3
A contest entry
- Love Me, Hate Me, Love Nature, Love yourself. by sluha.
530 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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One for me please!!!
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good
i smell conceit. lol. but im going to argue the best cuddler from here to sweeden. unless you were writing about me for just a breif stanza.
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Great
haha, it was kinda funny, pretty good, i liked it, but then again..i've liked all of your stuff i've read haha, so yeah...very good..but i have to say...im theb est cuddler..because i love to cuddle..but hey..you can be number 2 hahaha
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I must say that one of my favorite parts is, "Honestly, I'm adorable, And you can't deny it" I like, "I'd fold all your socks and maybe a few of your shirts" made me smile... specially since I really can't do that myself... hahaha... yeah... hte part of you being the best cuddler from here to Sweden was really good to... did you put that cause I said the picture was taken in Sweden? that was good... I really like this piece... And I guess i should be in love with you... hahaha. but yet again too many people have passed through your hands... wouldn't want to be one more gone... right? thank you for the entrie and good luck in the contest.
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its good
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There is something very interesting about this poem... it's well written and humorus. I think poetry is needed where it's allowed to write good things about yourself! I found some lines that I really like, and I just have to point out that you mentioned sweden, which I off course gotta think is pretty nice... This is a good piece! Keep it up!
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Yeah
It is FUNNY how self-centered this poem is. It makes me want to HATE you.
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