Dancing 'round my head,
Like fairies through my dreams,
Buzzing through the air,
My heart too full to bleed,
Do you hear the song,
As it whispers through the trees,
Can you hear my voice,
O' can you tell it's me?
This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?
A love too strong for words,
A light too strong for life,
How could you understand,
Pain sharper than a knife?
This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?
Dancing 'round my head,
Like fairies through my dreams,
Buzzing through the air,
My heart too full to bleed,
Do you hear the song,
As it whispers through the trees,
Can you hear my voice,
O' can you tell it's me?
This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?
A love too strong for words,
A light too strong for life,
How could you understand,
Pain sharper than your knife?
This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?
Author notes
Basically, you could have just read the first 4 stanzas and called it good, but this is the way I sing it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Lyricists and Songwriters!! by Andy Stephenson.
800 points, ended May 12, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good
I like it it makes me want to sing........How r u my dear friend? -
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okayish...ty for the nice comment!
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Very Good.
I could hear a melody as I read these lyrics. You said that you sing it. Is there a recording of it on the net? It doesn't quite fit the anniversary theme, but I am bumping it into the finalists. Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it.
Andy

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Thanx
I haven't recorded it at all...I've written about 3 or 4 songs total and this one was the first one I thought of...I actually have a love song that might fit better, tell me if you're interested.
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