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A Moonlit Lullaby (a song)

Dancing 'round my head,
Like fairies through my dreams,
Buzzing through the air,
My heart too full to bleed,

Do you hear the song,
As it whispers through the trees,
Can you hear my voice,
O' can you tell it's me?

This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?

A love too strong for words,
A light too strong for life,
How could you understand,
Pain sharper than a knife?

This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?

Dancing 'round my head,
Like fairies through my dreams,
Buzzing through the air,
My heart too full to bleed,

Do you hear the song,
As it whispers through the trees,
Can you hear my voice,
O' can you tell it's me?

This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?

A love too strong for words,
A light too strong for life,
How could you understand,
Pain sharper than your knife?

This moonlit lullaby,
Too real to be believed,
Can you hear me sigh,
Can you feel me breathe?

Author notes

Basically, you could have just read the first 4 stanzas and called it good, but this is the way I sing it.

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  • Snow White Queen
    July 15, 2007
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    Good

    I like it it makes me want to sing........How r u my dear friend?


  • Andy Stephenson
    May 9, 2007

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    Very Good.

    I could hear a melody as I read these lyrics. You said that you sing it. Is there a recording of it on the net? It doesn't quite fit the anniversary theme, but I am bumping it into the finalists. Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it.

    Andy


    • Salig Flicka
      May 9, 2007

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      Thanx

      I haven't recorded it at all...I've written about 3 or 4 songs total and this one was the first one I thought of...I actually have a love song that might fit better, tell me if you're interested.