When I die
I can fly.
Through the trees
Unafraid to be me.
When I cry
And want to die,
I think of the days
I’d try to fly.
But then I found myself thinking
I wish to die.
Author notes
Ummm... I was just trying this one out. I dont really like it that much but I just thought that I would post it anyways.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Dark by Xsafety glassX.
375 points, ended April 29, 2007, 59 entries
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short and awesome...i like it...it got right to the point and it rhymed too...thanx for entering my contest and i hope to see more poems like this later on
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