My eyes pop open
I must have fell into a light sleep at the bar,
Surprised that no one woke me
And I wake up,
My mental alarm clock buzzing at the sound of voice in my ear
I hear the words "smack that all on the floor",
And know that it's Akon
I take one last sip of my extra dry Martini and have no choice,
But to hit the dance floor.
I just cannot help it, whe I hear that voice,
I am forced to dance my heart out.
I move, shaking my ass, and touching my own face and neck,
As I see that I am bringing the males of the room closr to me.
They drift closer, and closer, some already dancing with me,
As if the can't help themselves anymore than I can.
As if they were bees to a flower
Grinding and moving to the beat,
I love the sound of the music.
The looks that I get from the women of the room,
Are the worst, but what do I care if I get their buyfriends for a night.
Hands moving all around me, I can feel them moving all over me.
Until the song ends and I head home for tonight, at least.
Author notes
Just thought of this, tell me what you think.
A contest entry
- Music Titles Contest by Welcome-To-Hell.
875 points, ended April 12, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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NICE SONG AND POEM
LOL, u did a great poem, it soo fun and inviting. How just one piece of music wakes you up to dance. Really good, luv it.
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i like it alot. I've experienced that once or twicw. just not the drinking part. lol.. -
This is actually pretty good i liked the way you couldnt help but to dance there are a few spelling errors you need to attend to but other then that very well written best of luck to you in the contest
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I like it though now I have that song stuck in my head. LOL The flow was nice. It mae me want to get up and dance. Like it alot. Great write.
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