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About Me

It was upon a midnight dreary,
where I hungered weak and weary
That I began to see so cleary
That I can't write quite sincerely
As to show myself completely
Bare and open - so I sweetly
Try to do this as discreetly
As I possibly - can.

I'm old and young at the same time;
I lack the gift for using rhyme
at the drop of a dime, some of the time.
I have some passiong in my life
That sometimes cause me heavy sftrife
Like sewing, reading, drawing too;
playing with animals - children too.
I also have family that I love,
But peace does not rest as a dove
Above my house. It has troubles, see -
That cause me endless agony
But why remains a mystery
Even to me. And so, you see -
My life is quite a travesty
Of song and dance and sad romance
(And God forbid I take a chance
on things like that.) And here I sit
Trying to rile you with my wit,
But now you just want me to stop.
And so I do.
And let you off.

Author notes

umm well i guess this is about me, it's really hard to write a poem describing yourself (at least for me it is). Don't worry, the next poem I write will actually be good and use imagery and stuff like that. lol.

me llamo Grace K., btw.

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    April 13, 2007
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    Well..this is very clever..pleased to meet ya


  • azure85 gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    Very good with the rhyming, and it is very clever in the first stanza!

    It was upon a midnight dreary,
    where I hungered weak and weary
    That I began to see so cleary
    That I can't write quite sincerely
    As to show myself completely
    Bare and open - so I sweetly
    Try to do this as discreetly
    As I possibly - can.

    They will love this poem in the contest! Good luck!


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 4, 2007
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    I love ur discription of urself, Well Done!!