All of the love in my life
Jacob
I felt so special, so unique,
When I was with you
At times you would excite me,
And make me feel on top of the world
But sometimes you would baffle me beyond belief
Talking to you, looking into your eyes,
Was just a blessing
And it might have been love,
But it's too late,
Because there's someone else, now
Alex
I didn't even know you that well,
I don't even know why I was attracted to you
Was it just because you were cute?
No, it couldn't have just been that
That couldn't have made me blush whenever you said my name
Or whenever you offered to do something for me,
All that I could get out was nothing
And maybe it was love,
But it's too late,
Because there's someone else, now
Skylar
What we feel for each other,
I may never know
Is it Love or is it just Lust?
Will we ever act like adults
And stop just playing around
Will we ever talk and get to know each other
And and see if this is really love,
Maybe it is, but maybe it isn't
But it's too late
Because there's someone else, now
Britan
I feel so much for you,
I don't even know how to put it into words.
What we feel is just...
The friendship that we have,
On top of the things that we feel now
I don't need or want anything from you,
And you don't need or want anything from me
The best feeling in the world,
To feel so free,
And yet so restricted,
I feel so happy and o' so sappy all of the time
And yet, sad that I won't see you for several hours,
Or days, that's the worst feeling
The best days of my life were consumed by you
But also the worst, and that is what love truely is.
You are the one that is right on time,
Because you are the one for me.
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Very nice and real. Have you showed any of these stanzas to the men involved? A very clear description of what you have been through. Very nice write!
Thanks for entering! Good luck!
