I found that love was just a lie
Something for me to wish to die
In the silence I will stand alone
This is my story I wish were told
If you ask me
That you wish to see
What it was meant to be
Then I will be free
But as of now
I ask you how
Shall I take my bow?
There is no
Peace from the doves!
There is no
True form of love!
Sing out!
Sing out!
There is no
Peace from the doves!
There is no
True form of love!
There is no reason for me to live
So I start to fall off the cliff
To my death I try to strain
To love and hate is all the same
In the end
There is to begin
A new form of sin
Of the Hell I’m in
But as of now
I ask you how
Shall I take my bow?
There is no
Peace from the doves!
There is no
True form of love!
Sing out!
Sing out!
There is no
Peace from the doves!
There is no
True form of love!
A contest entry
- so pretty much anything by Last Pixie.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In your darkest hour by Starz of Heaven.
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Nicley written, Goodluck
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I love the way you did this poem~ It's EXCELLENT! Nice write.
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nice. i've had a similar opinion of love. wonderfully short and expressive.
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Heart mirages
A very blunt view of love. Easy to feel that way too. Very well expressed.
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I like it a lot. Very realistic and easy to relate to.
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aaaw
O LOVES YOU THE MOSTEST ....DON"T WORR YI"LL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR YOU ...is this true....YOU ARE THE BEST DON"T YOU FORGET THAT and im not abusive if you hug another girl whose your friend as long as its a friend or something like that. I"LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU NO MATTER WHAT 's 's ...if you EVER need to talk im here for ya .
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this is a good write. You just need to know where to look for love though.
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great poem...is this a true poem
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