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if there was no tomorrow

If I knew there was no tomorrow,
I'd run to you,
I'd forget my painfull yesterdays,
brush off my painfull past,
and although I'd know it couldnt,
I'd wish that moment to forever last.
I'd hold you with tenderness,
and kiss your sweet lips,
I'd tell you how much I love you,
and never loose my grip.
my hand in yours,
we could walk through eternity,
we could be together,
in our infinate serenity.

but most of all,
if I knew there was no tomorrow,
I'd run to YOU.

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  • Sweetangelgrace
    April 5, 2007
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    "If I knew there was no tomorrow,
    I'd run to YOU" It straight touched my heart!
    It was an excellent poem and as I read it, it seemed to be like someone was whispering it in my ear. It flows nicely, and the reader becomes consumed by emotion as they read it. It was amazing!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~~GRACE~~