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Walking Away

Look into my eyes
Beg me please
Do the things for me I do for you every day
Stop playing games with my emotions
Do you love me
Am I more than what you say
How long do you want me to live this way
To live and wonder
Does he care or am I just there
I could do this forever
But I wont
I no longer need you
I thought at one point I did
That with out you I would be nothing
And thats how you wanted it to be
It gave you the freedom to do as you wish
Then come back to me
You knew I'd never leave
You have treated me like shit and put me through hell
But I have finally had enough
It was fun while it lasted
Don't get me wrong
I love you now and have all along
I just reffuse to let you make me live this way
So now it's my turn to decided
And I'm choosing to walk away

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  • storiesuntold
    July 18, 2007
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    Love yourself always

    Its sad to lose someone who you feel so strongly about and at times you feel maybe it was your fault. Never ever feel itys your fault for there are people in this world that will say anything to get what they want and to them its just talk. You will find that special person just be grateful he moved on for mr right has a chance now .

  • Ryan gold member
    May 3, 2007
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    Excellent

    This was a very exceptional piece of art. bravo!


  • Breaking The Girl
    April 11, 2007

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    ...and once again... wow. This was great, not just the poem, but the emotions and thoughts that came with it.