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On My Way

In this life of mine
Filled with immense emotion
I feel that I can succeed
At least that is my notion

Taking it one day at a time
I know its so cliché
It is really the truth
In life I am on my way

That way is unknown
Except by HIM of course
I believe in myself
And show no self remorse

I try to do my best
Hoping it will suffice
Putting in it all of my love
Wanting it to be so precise

The end result is unclear
One I cannot view
Not because of my vision
But because it has yet to debut


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  • knitonepearlone
    April 5, 2007
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    LIfe can seem cliche at times but your poem comes from the soul.