Have you ever felt an ache so deep within?
Threatening to swallow your heart and soul?
Has your heart ever been dehydrated?
Thirst unable to be quenched with your tears?
Have you ever hated with your being?
Past the point of tasting your enemy?
Has your soul longed to devour his pain?
To taste the blood spilling forth release?
Have you ever looked beyond your own eyes?
Seen only darkness and a vacant stare?
Have you ever wondered where life has gone?
Lived amongst the living but not been part?
If you have answered yes to my questions,
I would like to welcome you to my world.
There is no escaping the demons here,
For we will never let you rest in peace.
Author notes
ok. this is only a write not how i feel. thank you for reading.
A contest entry
- Take Me Down by Sle3p.
450 points, ended April 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The fact of the matter is , yes I have hated someone this much. It ate at me and ate at me until my soul started to whither. Finally I decided that grudge bearing and hatred made me as bad as the object of my anger.
This was an excellent write my friend.
Very well done
Roses ( black ones)
Raker
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have you ever is a very good question,love it
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kewlness
WOW!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!! I first liked the questions and the answers of yes thing, that was creative and great job with that. I also like how you expressed the pain. Great write and Great job!!! -
this is kind of chilling...must have gotten dark inside there at least for a moment to write this. mumaaaaaaa! LOL. great job and good luck in the contest.
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