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Normality

I cannot have a normal life
Thought I've tried so hard
You keep overprotecting me
Trying to save my life

Normality is something I want
Something I can never have
Why is it you can't let me live
I've been trying so hard

All I wanted was normality before I leave
I haven't got long this illness is killing me
So let me live my life to the full
You said I'm to young to make my own choices

How can I die before I've lived
You have to let me have normality
i don't want my life to be all medicine
Treatments and cancer

I need normality
It's the one thing
That you say
I can't have

Author notes

please know this is purely fiction I don't actually have cancer But I wanted to exspress emotions that come with it.

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    April 5, 2007

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    very nice. Full of emotion. well written except for a couple of mistakes. you did a great job expressing the person's need for normality. Great job thanks for the entry.