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Peace be still (Etheree)

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Peace
and calm
gentle words
pervade my mind
with peaceable thoughts
of soothing wind and waves
Jesus commands, Peace be still
Fears and sorrows are chased away
replaced with assurance that God rules
The storms of life obey him: They dont last!

 

 

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    You've done incredible on this form here and it holds such a powerful message. Thanks for your entry here


  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007
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    peace is what i felt as i read this poem
    your words were wonderful


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    April 10, 2007

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    Spiritual Poet

    Good inspirational Etheree form poem. Good flow and choice of words used here. Write On!

    Dennis


  • sheltered
    April 9, 2007
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    Such an abundantly peaceful feeling from this. Great job.


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 7, 2007

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    I do love these forms, anad often find them centered rather than the left alignment - gives them a completely different appearance. Might want to try that to see how you like the difference. Great picture too.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 7, 2007
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    A lovely write, message and presentation. Heartfelt. Perfect form. Very good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Your faith shines in this piece. Well crafted and a most enjoyable read.


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    Very nice ~

    I just IM'd you about this poem....I shall come

    back and review it after I figure out what I discussed with you ~

     

    SMILE!!

     

    Bear ~


  • azure85 gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    A wonderful etheree about the love of the Lord, as He commands all fears to go. Beautifully crafted, and written well in this form. Such lovely thoughts for this Easter season.


  • Samplette gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    A wonderful write with a wonderful message..the storms of life don't last. A great Etheree. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

  • memorymaker
    April 4, 2007
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    yes Jesus can calm all waters, all fears , I have found his peace over the latest storm we faced ... he has calmed my heart and replace my fears and sorrows with new hope for Kimmy and for Juanita...Thanks my friend for helping me find this peace Jesus was offering me

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