Crucifixtion!
Nailed to the cross between thieves.
Crucifixtion!
Saved our souls from affliction.
For all His enemies He grieves,
From all our sins His death relieves
Crucifixtion!
Author notes
Rondelet
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #13 by Samplette.
425 points, ended April 5, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A perfect amount of wording to get your message across, gets me thinking about the yin and yang effect here. On one side he forgave the thief who admitted his wrongdoing [light/good], and the other was spiteful and got pecked at by a crow..[dark/evil], the same goes for Jesus and the devil... the balance is always even [in favor of both sides]...
Great write Sandy..
Jeffro -
For sure, I knew that this would be a trophy winner - congrats on the silver trophy you deserve it! x
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Thank You
Thank you for the nice comment. I so appreciate it.
Bless you, Sandy
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Rooaaarrrr!
My Sweet Sandy ~
I read this yesterday as well, and told my boyfriend
how cool this was, and that I knew it was gonna
place somewhere in the top 3....
...am I smart or what?? :))
A totally beautiful write with just the
perfect amount of words to get your message through ~
I hope it inspires and lifts hearts as it has done mine ~
Lovely as always,
once again, congrats on that big ole Silver Trophy!!
Bear ~
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Such a Beautiful Comment
Oh sweet Bear, your comment was so nice and made me smile. I am so honored you enjoyed this poem. You are such a master at form poetry. Your thoughts on my poetry mean so much to me. And to have your boyfriend read is another honor. Thank you my dear friend. Bless you both. Thank you for all the smiles you give me.
You take care,
My sweet Bear,
Sandy
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Wonderful! Congratulations on the silver. I am happy to see it there, for this is so very beautiful.
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Thank You!!!!!!!
Hello going nowhere, Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a wonderful comment. You take care, Sandy
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hi my lovely auntie
The internet is working soooooooooooooo slowly here, but I did my best to be with you here again.
This is a very nice piece. Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Sweet Niece That Can't Be Beat!!!
You are so amazing Shahrzad. You give sop much of yourself to others. You are such a blessing to me asnd so many others. I wish you happiness everyday. You are in my prayers. You take care of yourself!!! 
Bless you,
sandy
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SO BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!
That moment of his dying is one which says so much, a love so true, for all, and sadly we have just never learned from this.
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Thank You Dear Friend!!!!
Hello Kevin, So nice to read your comment. Yes god so loved the world and you and I that He gave His only begotten son to save us. How awesome is He!!! And then He blesses me with a friend like you. So sweet and caring.
You take care, Sandy
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humblely swept away...
Every sigh.....bleeds from his tear swept eyes...for his love for us....was the inmortal cry. -
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Thank You Sandra
Your comment was lovely and I appreciate you stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy
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This is an incredible rondolet and so fitting for Easter - congratulations! This has to be a winner. x
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Lovely Comment
Hello, Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an encouraging comment. I so appreciate it. You take care.
Bless you,
Sandy
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What a magnificent Rondelet, to uplift what a magnificent thing our Christ did for us. Beautifully done. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Sam for the wonderful comment. It is always appreciated from a talented poet such as you. Take care, Sandy
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