I sat in a church after what I had done,I cried at the altar,I had killed my only love.
I looked to the sky through a stained glass window that caught my eye, I asked god to take my life for I have killed my only wife.
Then an angel from above, he said son you have no time to die or cry, with this one sin your journey has begun. Then he flew off to the sky through the stained glass window that caught my eye.
So I stood up and took the street, a savior to all in which I meet, to help the sinners to repent what the sow, then at night, I return to my stained glass window.
A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
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um...
I liked the poem a lot even though I don't see how it could help my situation...
But it was a great write and I will give you my applause.
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good job, but sadly, i dontl ike to express relgion in my poems, not saying that you cant, but i was expressing my opinion, so please dont get offeneded good job and good luck in the contest though
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amazing, i like this alot, it's very interesting indeed
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I like it. I can feel the emotion in it.
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Wow...that was amazing...I love stained glass windows and the title fits the poem well...
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