I love your eyes
Because they see beyond
What others see.
I love your smile
Because it brings sunshine
To my life.
I love your hands
Because in them
I find comfort and trust.
I love your heart
Because yours is one
That understands
And accepts me
For who I am.
I love your face
For the joy it brings
To my heart.
I love your voice
For the loving words
You say to me.
I love your touch
For how it soothes me
In troubled times.
I love your gentle ways
For the harmony
It brings in my life.
I love your lips
For the great joy of expectation
And the satisfaction they always bring.
I love your embrace
For the warmth
And refuge I seek.
I love your tenderness
For the peace
It brings my soul.
I love your love
For the beautiful
Difference it has made.
And the best part of all—
I love how
You’re the beginning
Of all that I’ve longed for.
A contest entry
- How Are You Feeling? ((PRE-WRITES ALLOWED!)) by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 28, 2007, 167 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love in the First Degree by Sensual Sapphire.
1225 points, ended July 15, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you so much, its really rare to find a good poem that would say exactly all i feel
these days all is about angst and pain that came from a broken heart. so thank you so much for writing down what i feel. thank you. -elena
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Yes, sadly there is too much angst and pain out there. Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comment.
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Beautiful. Your poems always have very deep expression & I feel that I can relate to every one. This also reminds me of my ex...but now that were just 'friends' it's so hard not to love everything about him.
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Awww this is so sweet
this is beautiful
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well wot can i say? i LOVE this piece. reminds me of one of my ex's ... with whom im still friends... he was disabled but we saw through it although some shallow minded people couldnt. it was still one of the best relationships i ever had in my life.
hugs,
feral,
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Thank you Feral. I'm glad you enjoyed it. My poems help me to love better. It not only make me think of love but how to act lovingly.
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Awwwwwwwwww this is sweet, it's very simple yet it has such a loving feel behind it. Well done, I really liked to read the love on this page.
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Thank you for such a kind comment. Love should be about the whole person. Don't you think.
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I do think it should be about a person as a whole. I for one like it when someone takes the time to talk with me, for once they do it is more then just young and pretty there is a brain in there too, and a loving and giving heart.
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For me, a thinking woman, someone I can talk with is the ultimate. I'm not interested in a so called "dumb blonde" or a just a body.
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ack... this one made me cry missing my husband. but still... one of the most beautiful love poems i have ever read. so many are similar and even use the same lines or expressions over and over but you have bought new life to the love poem
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georgie,
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Thank you. Yes this how one should love. My poems on love deals with the way we should love. I try very hard to live up to my poetry words.
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This is how you are suppose to love someone, I think. you captured your feelings very well here and I really enjoyed reading this... Looks like romance has not died.....
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This is an extremely good poem! I was hokked from the beginning!
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great poem,your very skilled when it comes to romantic poems.
that is my specialty,i have wrote acouple of new poems yesterday and today,i would greatly appreciate it if you read them and shared your opinion with me.
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What a wonderful write. So much sweet tendernes woven through your words. Tender passion and devotion flow through each line. Well done. Loved it.
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Such sweet charming words of dedication and devotion. Wonderfully penned.
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Thank you
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I was feeling a little down before this but then when I read your poem, it totally lifted me up like how true love and life really is and for what it's worth. I'm sure whoever you wrote it for would have loved it and loved you very much. Keep writing, and let nothing stop you!
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This is the sort of piece
that makes your heart lighter. When we find the one it either takes forever to know it's them or we know in the times it takes to draw in a breath. Well done thank you for entering. -
Beautiful...so gentle and loving...
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Simply beautiful. Your words are so full of love and I have read this poem several times and each time I have read it I get a warm glow all over. You are a very lucky man to have found someone so special in your life. May your happiness last a lifetime. Julie.
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I am glad you liked it. My endeavor is to be better at loving every day. It's good that I can write about it.
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enchanting!
Magical and beautiful.
smile
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This poem is very beautiful <3 i loved it so much, you are a very talented poet, and this poem was pure perfection in my eyes as well as others =)
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Thank you very much. This is one of my favorites.
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This is just so beautiful, a love like this...this is just beautiful. My heart sighs 4 this 2 happen 2 me someday. A wonderful write grandfather!
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Beautiful Repetition
You have done a excellent job, I enjoyed the read. Oh yes, you have just reminded me of Elizabeth B. Browning and her work from long ago. You counted the ways, and done it so well. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart with us all..........novy
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So Romantic and passionate and accepting of all things about her. What a treasure this would be to get such emotions about yourself from a "Hopeful Romantic" good job!
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a beautiful poem! its to the point, and very emotional
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Beautiful
Wow this is so romantic and simply beautiful Its always a great thing to let someone know how you feel about them, people tend not to do that to much anymore, and this is something any woman would love to get. Excellent poem
Suzanne
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Thank you for your comments. I wanted to write a poem that said, "How I Love You" in ways that described that love toward the whole person. It's sort of like, "How Do I Love Thee, Let Me Count the Ways" but a modern version.
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this poem caresses the emotional part of the woman and the poem is a quick read that is very passionate. i would ease up on the capitalization on the first part of each line though.
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i love this poem im gonna have my b/f read this
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Beautiful and passionate
well done!!!!
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Very nice write you wrote here. A great love poem you wrote. Like the poem alot and best luck in the contest.
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wow! now what does a gal have to do to create this type of emotion in someone who doesn't even know she exists? that information is more valuable to me than the winning lottery ticket. good luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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O WOW!! This is the greatest love poem I've read today, the way ur words flow and they fit together like pieces of a magnificent art. Well Done!! Just Very beautiful and wonderful!!
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I absolutely love this one! So beautiful as it caresses the page and gives wondrous insight into your beautiful heart....smiles, Terry
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