When the stars come out at night,
And the moon just shines so bright,
And the darkness closes in Lord
In the night
And my feelings come out around me in the night
Lord God this feels so right.
I feel the rush,
I feel the flow,
I feel you move in
aAll around me in the night.
Lord God this feels so right
I hear your songs
I hear your beat
I hear your voice
Just speaking to me
I feel you move in the night.
Lord God this feels so right
I feel your light,
I feel your love,
I feel the voice speaking above.
I feel you move in,
I feel you move in
In the night.
Lord God I feel your light
I feel your trust,
I feel you Christ,
I feel unending light,
I love you God on high.
I can see in a new light,
I can see I need you Lord
I can see your love is stronger
Than Love could go before,
You gave new meaning to the word love.
When the stars come out at night,
And the moon just shines so bright,
And the darkness closes in Lord,
And my feelings come out around me in the night.
Lord God this feels so right,
I feel the rush,
I feel the flow,
I feel it move in
All around me in the night.
Lord God this feels so right.
Lord God this feels so right.
Author notes
I mostly get my inspiration at night to write my poems I feel the most open then. but sex before marriage is wrong it is unclean and a thing of satan and we must restrain I know I've fallen for his temptation many times but in different areas
A contest entry
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850 points, ended April 9, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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wow
You are a JESUS FINATIC !!!! I can tell you are very devoted to god though. That is very unusal nowadays but refreshing. Keep on being that person don't let any one try and change that about you.
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When the stars come out at night and the moon just shines so bright and the darkness closes in Lord in the night Lord and my feelings come out around me in the night Lord God this feels so right,
Lord was used alot in this part but a very nice intro to the rest of your poem.Keep up the awsome writes,
Kurenai -
Very nice poem. This is exactly what I wanted and you protrayed this message very well. Although, let me say this one thing: Please use correct grammar and put your poems into stanzas. Trust me, it'll make your readers able to understand your message a lot more if it was in stanzas vrs. a long paragraph. Thanks for this lovely write, good luck and God bless!
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